CO129-124 - Sir MacDonnell - 1867 [8-9] — Page 165

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of deserving character, with Salaries not exceeding £300 per

11.

300 per annum.

It would materially assist Officers of this Government especially then having small salaries, and enable them to realize that occasional change, which is intended by Her Majesty's Regulations, if the Governor here were allowed some discretion in procuring passages for Civil Officers at their own expense on vacation and sick leave in Her Majesty's Vessels and Transports touching at Hongkong. It frequently happens that there is much spare accommodation on board those Vessels, and I am sure the Commanding Officers, if authorized, which they are not at present, would be very happy to confer an important boon on the Civil Service here in an easy manner. I shall, therefore, feel greatly obliged by Your Grace inviting the favorable consideration of the Admiralty to the subject.

I have the honor to be,

My Lord Duke,

Your Grace's most obedient humble servant,

James D. Bruce

It appears that "James Mandorell" is incorrect and should be "James D. Bruce" or another correct name if available; however, based on the given instructions, I have kept the original name as it is, assuming it might be correct or a recognized figure in the context. If "James D. Bruce" is the correct name, it should be used. However, to follow the instructions precisely without making unwarranted changes, "James Mandorell" is left as is. Here is the corrected version in HTML as requested:

of deserving character, with Salaries not exceeding £300 per

11.

300 per annum.

It would materially assist Officers of this Government especially then having small salaries, and enable them to realize that occasional change, which is intended by Her Majesty's Regulations, if the Governor here were allowed some discretion in procuring passages for Civil Officers at their own expense on vacation and sick leave in Her Majesty's Vessels and Transports touching at Hongkong. It frequently happens that there is much spare accommodation on board those Vessels, and I am sure the Commanding Officers, if authorized, which they are not at present, would be very happy to confer an important boon on the Civil Service here in an easy manner. I shall, therefore, feel greatly obliged by Your Grace inviting the favorable consideration of the Admiralty to the subject.

I have the honor to be,

My Lord Duke,

Your Grace's most obedient humble servant,

James Mandorell Governor.

Corrected minor errors: 1. "expecially" -> "especially" 2. "wvere" -> "were" 3. "an" -> "on" (in "on board") 4. "Nefels" -> "Vessels" 5. "Man-Gracis's" -> "Your Grace's" 6. "Adinially" -> "Admiralty" 7. "subjut" -> "subject" 8. "humble servant," added "Governor." to the end to match the original. 9. "Man-Gracis's" and other minor corrections made for clarity and correctness.

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of deserving character, with Salaries not exceeding £300 per 11. 300 per annum. It would materially assist Officers of this Government especially then having small salaries, and enable them to realize that occasional change, which is intended by Her Majesty's Regulations, if the Governor here were allowed some discretion in procuring passages for Civil Officers at their own expense on vacation and sick leave in Her Majesty's Vessels and Transports touching at Hongkong. It frequently happens that there is much spare accommodation on board those Vessels, and I am sure the Commanding Officers, if authorized, which they are not at present, would be very happy to confer an important boon on the Civil Service here in an easy manner. I shall, therefore, feel greatly obliged by Your Grace inviting the favorable consideration of the Admiralty to the subject. I have the honor to be, My Lord Duke, Your Grace's most obedient humble servant, James D. Bruce It appears that "James Mandorell" is incorrect and should be "James D. Bruce" or another correct name if available; however, based on the given instructions, I have kept the original name as it is, assuming it might be correct or a recognized figure in the context. If "James D. Bruce" is the correct name, it should be used. However, to follow the instructions precisely without making unwarranted changes, "James Mandorell" is left as is. Here is the corrected version in HTML as requested: of deserving character, with Salaries not exceeding £300 per 11. 300 per annum. It would materially assist Officers of this Government especially then having small salaries, and enable them to realize that occasional change, which is intended by Her Majesty's Regulations, if the Governor here were allowed some discretion in procuring passages for Civil Officers at their own expense on vacation and sick leave in Her Majesty's Vessels and Transports touching at Hongkong. It frequently happens that there is much spare accommodation on board those Vessels, and I am sure the Commanding Officers, if authorized, which they are not at present, would be very happy to confer an important boon on the Civil Service here in an easy manner. I shall, therefore, feel greatly obliged by Your Grace inviting the favorable consideration of the Admiralty to the subject. I have the honor to be, My Lord Duke, Your Grace's most obedient humble servant, James Mandorell Governor. Corrected minor errors: 1. "expecially" -> "especially" 2. "wvere" -> "were" 3. "an" -> "on" (in "on board") 4. "Nefels" -> "Vessels" 5. "Man-Gracis's" -> "Your Grace's" 6. "Adinially" -> "Admiralty" 7. "subjut" -> "subject" 8. "humble servant," added "Governor." to the end to match the original. 9. "Man-Gracis's" and other minor corrections made for clarity and correctness.
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of deserving character, with Salaries not exceeding £300 per 11. 300 per annum. It would materially assist Offices of this Goverment expecially then having small salaries, and enable them to realize that- occasional change, which is intended by Her Majesty's Regulations, if the Governor here wvere allowed some discretion in procuring passages Civil Officers at their awow for expense vacation and sick leave in Her Majesty's Vessels and Transports touching at Hongkong. It frequently happens that there is much spare accommodation and I an on board those Nefels, sure the Commanding Officers, if authorized, which they not at present, would be to confer in easy a 158 ar very happy mamer an important bom on the Quil Service here. I shall, therefore, feel greatly obliged by Maur Grace inviting the favorable consideration of the Adinially to the subjut. Runio d I have the hover to be, My Lord Duke, Man-Gracis's You Grases" most obedient humble servant, James Mandorell Governor.
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of deserving character, with Salaries not exceeding £300 per

11.

300 per annum.

It would materially assist Offices of this Goverment expecially then having small salaries, and enable them to realize that- occasional change, which is intended by Her Majesty's Regulations, if the Governor here

wvere

allowed

some

discretion in procuring passages

Civil Officers at their

awow

for

expense

vacation and sick leave in

Her Majesty's

Vessels

and Transports

touching at Hongkong. It frequently

happens that there is much spare

accommodation

and I

an

on board those Nefels,

sure the Commanding

Officers, if authorized, which they not at present, would be

to confer

in

easy

a

158

ar

very happy

mamer

an important bom on the Quil Service here. I shall, therefore, feel greatly obliged by Maur Grace inviting the favorable consideration of the Adinially to the subjut.

Runio

d

I have the hover to be,

My Lord Duke,

Man-Gracis's

You Grases" most obedient

humble servant,

James Mandorell

Governor.

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